Hi guys! I am not leaving, just wrote a poem called goodbye. Hope you like it! Also it’s in lowercase because whenever I write poems I just write in lowercase for no random reason… XD
it’s time
to say goodbye
to everything i love
every single thing
i have ever known
goodbye, friends
goodbye, family
goodbye, world.
goodbye everything i have ever known.
it’s hard
to say goodbye
but i must struggle
oh the struggles
but i’ll just bear through
tear down
a hole in my life
it’s time
to say goodbye
it’s heartbreaking
it’s hard
to let go
of everything i have ever known.
but i must say goodbye to everyone.
everything.
every single step of the way
every single wonder or praise
it’s time to let go
say goodbye
this is my goodbye.
goodbye, world.
So, did you like it? I had fun writing it!!!
Ahhh I loved the repetition in this š Also, I hope you’re okay. This was such a chilling and mournful poem; you should post more! (Woah that sounded kind of… Sadistic?? I’m SORRY!!)
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Thank you Elm! I actually agree! I definitely will!
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Awesome!!
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That sounded like a poem someone would read when they’re going to die…
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Haha yeah! Don’t worry, I’m not planning on dyeing anytime soon.
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Hahah I hope not!
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yay!
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PFFFT……august last year maybe?? idk…..
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Good Job!
B.T.W When you but an I as in like but i must struggle, the I needs to be in Caps. Just a heads up. š
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Thanks Mary! Yeah I know, I usually write in all lowercase and no grammer when writing poetry…. idk why…. XD
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XD. Get Lazy too. š
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WOAH, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you soooooo much Kaylyn!
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My pleasure!
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Idk why I’m telling you but I just realized I have 111 followers (XD) When did you start your blog? haha idk why I’m asking you this but I am. XD
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*Please don’t go* lol.
The fact that it’s in small letters made it strange to read. But I enjoyed reading it.
(goodbye…)
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XD I’ll fix that right now, I copied it from somewhere else I wrote it so that may be why. Thank you so much!!
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Do You have a blog?
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Yes Mary. Do check it outš
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